Someone once asked me how I write songs. Do they just pop into my head as finished pieces? Do I always start with a melody? A chord progression? A lyric?
The answer, for me, is all of the above. The song fragments I’m going through and sharing with you on a weekly basis consist of snippets of poetry, fragments of melodies, and beginnings of chord progressions. As a song begins to come together, I will draw on other pieces if I think they fit or write new material to flesh it out. This may mean borrowing or quoting an idea from another song or even cannibalizing another work-in-progress for a bridge &c.
The song Inclined on The Blue and the Grey developed in this fashion. The first verse existed as a poem fragment for a while before I wrote the other two verses (I wrote it while I running late to class). I then set the verses to music, using a chord progression I’d been toying with in the blues guitar lessons I was taking. Months later, I was jamming through those verses, over and over, when the chorus came to me. In about twenty minutes, the song went from half-done to completed.
The lyrics below are another example. I began with the lyrics to the first verse roughly a year ago, with maybe a faint idea for a melody. The chorus came shortly after. On several occasions since, I’ve reread these lyrics in the hopes that I’ll get inspired to complete them. All that I’ve done instead is generate worthless, uninspired tripe. Finally I got an idea for the second verse, and that was added a couple of weeks ago. Now…to finish it! First, I need to refine the lyrics, tighten them up. Then I need to arrange the song…pick a key, work out a chord progression, solidify the rhythm and flow. I probably need to add a third verse and a bridge.
This is where you come in, dear friend. Please review these lyrics and offer A) your constructive criticism and B) if you like, your additions/changes/deletions. I greatly appreciate it!
[verse 1]
Funny thing, this coalescence
Rain upon a thirsty ground
Fills the nose with spring-time nectar
Leaves the air with falling sound
Warm and friendly in its manner
Soothing to the tempest’s soul
Filtered through the sieve of heaven
Slung upon the thunder roll
[pre-chorus]
Rain in the Texas sky ( x3)
You move me on
[chorus]
‘Cause/For I know where I belong
Where weakness finds Him strong
I know where I belong
You move me on
[verse 2]
Listen to the pitter-patter
Every surface roiling
Rainfall runs in rivulets
Coronates the heir of spring
Rushing to become a river
Tributaries ocean-bound
Rain upon these thirsty acres
Circulates the world around
[chorus]
‘Cause I know where I belong
Where weakness finds Him strong
And all these waking enemies
Wash away, fade away
You move me on
Lyrics